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Funny, my first Critique as a CC member is a nipple; my wife would say "it figures".
First off, I think this is a good idea for temperature and does bring cold to my mind (among other things).
So how would I improve on this image?
First I would have shown more of the breast, perhaps backing out far enough to see both sides, while also showing the finger tips holding the ice cube, although adding that may have been interesting but at the same time might have taken away from the overall focus of the image.
As far as the nipple itself, I would have moved slightly down a bit probably about 3 inches or so to show an almost side view of it because the area above and to the left is drawing my eye there, taking the attention away from the droplet coming from the ice cube. Also the droplet on the left of the breast is a bit (not too much, just a little) distracting.
Overall its really good idea for temperature, nice job.
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