Not sure what I am looking at here and the composition+the shallow DOF makes this very cluttered and irritating to look at, at least for my part. Sorry but I don´t like it, gave it a 3.
Ahhhhh what??? b&w dead on, lighting ok I quess, nice texture, dof ok, but what the hell am I looking at? what self portrait? overall a good abstract at best
Sorry, I can't even tell what this is. Looks like a bodice and an out of focus belly button?? Not very much of the photo is in focus, and what little IS in focus, doesn't make sense to me. This must appear different to you, since you were there to see the whole picture. The title doesn't even help, maybe even distracts, since I'm looking for some type of body part, or person. just something down there in the bottom right that looks similar to a belly button. Again, sorry, I really tried. ~Heather~
I presume that it is a leg with suspenders. I am not sure where I am meant to focus my eye. The part that is in focus is a bit chaotic, and the exciting piece (the leg) is out of focus.
no idea what is happening there but as an abstract composition it is fine and catched the eye for much more than usual few seconds. I suggest a slight crop on the left.
My initial reaction to this was "Huh?". After looking at it a bit I think what I'm seeing is a corset but I can't make out the area beyond that. I wish I could say it was interesting as an abstract study but this just isn't working for me at all.
It took several minutes for me to decide what I was looking at. I see now it is a garter belt, thigh and fishnet hose. Your focus and DOF need work. This is much too out of focus to be effective, IMO.
Interesting as an abstract, and the title probably saved this from the typical gloss over an abstract usually gets here. I think I would like it cropped further from the left so that the small white arch is not included. My eyes, drawn to the brightest points in the photos picked it out, and once knowing it's there, I cannot stop going back to it. Also, above the leg, there's a circular point of light: a lens flare, cloning remnants, a toe or shoe blurred by DOF? I can't tell, but I think cloning it out would add minutely to the image. 7
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