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07/22/2003 09:20:15 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club,
Hi Andy!
I already addressed my main problems with the shot in my previous comment, but I'll gladly explain more now. I think the main focus of the picture is what? Your cousin, right? Ok, let's start there. Did you want the street signs in the picture? If you did, put them ALL in the picture. If not, get them out. What about the lights across the street. Weren't they a little bright? Try moving over to your right and take a more straight shot at your model, maybe getting the lights out of the center of the picture.
I like your choice of black and white here. I wish that there was more interest and she looked more like she wanted her picture taken! :)
Good job and happy shooting. Keep up the good work and learning. You'll get there! :)
M
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07/15/2003 09:49:21 PM |
| Fits the challenge. It's overexposed and blurry, and pretty grainy. Plus your subject doesn't look all that happy. |
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07/15/2003 09:47:02 PM |
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07/15/2003 02:25:04 PM |
| If it weren't quite so blurry, this could well be a 9 shot (by my lights, anyway), but as it is, the girl is smudged and hard to focus on (with one's eyes, I mean), and the impact is lost. Great composition and choice of subjects/pose, though. |
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07/15/2003 09:03:30 AM |
| She looks bored.....thought a night on the town should be fun! |
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07/11/2003 08:38:06 PM |
| Interesting composition, but a bit grainy. A little sharper might be an improvement. |
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07/11/2003 12:21:51 PM |
| To me, the focus is off a bit. Slow speed/no tripod? |
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07/11/2003 05:05:45 AM |
| A little too soft. This looks like if clearer, it would've been a really nice pic. I'm not sure what greyscaling did for it, aside from taking away any problems there might've been with the lighting and such. Good effort |
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07/11/2003 04:39:29 AM |
| The main subject is too out of focus here. |
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07/11/2003 04:04:13 AM |
| Not good focus, too much glare from the lights in the background. |
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07/11/2003 01:32:22 AM |
| is there a significance to this particular street corner? |
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07/09/2003 02:06:25 PM |
| A faster shutter speed and something else in the photo could have added interest. 6 |
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07/09/2003 07:48:19 AM |
| i personally would not include the blur. but great shot! |
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07/09/2003 03:49:58 AM |
| Nice composition and I like the subject but this isn't in focus. The glare of the light in the bottom centre is a bit strong, too. |
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