You've presented a capture that is very bold and powerful without giving the sense of overdoing the highlights. Although some areas are overexposed, or so it would seem, the overall impact is truly enhanced with this very unique style of processing. Great job with this very high quality entry... :)
on one hand, you obviously have decent equipment and an eye for color. on the other, this feels more like a snapshot than a photograph. i think it has to be the centering of the composition. if shot from a different perspective, you would have something here.