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01/14/2006 02:40:46 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
The critique I am doing is for "Mother and Son, Country Silhouette"
First Impression - the most important one:
What a beatiful silhoette, the sky looks fantastic .. and really helps to capture the feeling of love in the air.
Composition:
I like the setup of this picture, I can't imagine how many times they did this to achieve the shot you got. My main issue would be in the cropping, I think that trying various croppings that get the subjects on the third lines may have ienhance the picture. There was a lot of black at the bottom this didn't really do a lot for the picture, there is nothing against it, but did it help the image ... not really sure here.
Subject:
Mum and son ... this totally meets the subject.
Technical (Colour and light):
I think that this is really quite good in this picture, Can I ask if you used a filter here?
To grow its vote?:
This was a tough competition .. I personally think you did fantastic with a great shot.
Summary:
Lovely shot, great concept and well worked. This is your highest scoring so far .. .and it deserves to be. Keep it up you are improving and doing a great job.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari
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01/08/2006 11:13:14 PM |
| Very moving image. Great Shot! |
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01/08/2006 03:38:17 PM |
| A nice silhouette, and you've captured beautiful colors in the sky, but to my eyes it doesn't look as crisp as I would like. I would also like to have seen a more dynamic angle for this to give it more power. Maybe with the fence at a sharper angle somehow to give it more interest. |
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01/05/2006 07:27:41 PM |
| I am a sucker for a silhoueete. This is great. Love your use of backlighting and the angle of your shot. |
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01/05/2006 07:27:34 PM |
| Very touching. Bumping up. |
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01/03/2006 08:42:52 PM |
| Very nice composition! Good choice of subject matter. Nice image quality. Has potential of being really creative. - 6 |
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01/03/2006 01:14:22 PM |
| Nice sillouette and gradient to the sky. I'm not sure the horse adds to the picture. I'd like to see it cropped without. 6 |
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01/03/2006 07:04:39 AM |
| This is a nice silhouette. I would have liked it better without the horse. You captured a very cute moment. |
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01/02/2006 06:31:01 PM |
| This is an awesome take on this challenge. I love this one. Love it! 10 |
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01/02/2006 05:51:14 PM |
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01/02/2006 12:00:33 PM |
| nice shot ...love the sky well done |
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01/02/2006 01:00:34 AM |
| I think the horse does it for me. Great silhouette. Nicely achieved. |
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