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01/20/2006 08:20:25 AM |
Thanks graphicfunk, it is an honor to receive comments from You.
I agree with You, the funny thing is that I used the table tripod but I was shouting in Ps mode :( ... I hope I learned the lesson :)
Originally posted by graphicfunk:
greetings from the cririque club:
All photographers seek this type of image. That is a dramatic sky with luscious colors and then a lovely silhoutte to complement the composition. It is evident that you seek this beauty and this is perhaps the area where nobody can really you guide you. This is good you have this nice inborn talent.
The image has an immediate appeal as it has enough play to really accent the silhoutte parts of the image. All I can do here is express some minor ideas for exploration. The main thrust of the image is right heavy, that is it is here where the eyes find the most dynamic exchange between light and dark. Ir is also okay to leave the image balanced as is with more weight on the right. One item for exploration is the total inclusion of the right plant and then to close in a little on the left because the impact begins to diminish as the eye turns to the left. This attention on the right plant will help define this shape more to get closer to the challenge. I also notice a spec of light right on the left of the palm trees. Of course, in basic editing we are stuck with that, but little as this is it creates a minor distraction. Notice, this is minor.
Now, on the technical side you could have chosen to close the lens more. from 5.6 you can go to f8 and this would still leave 1/80. Of course, this would be an ideal tripod shot say at f11 at 1/40. This will allow a sharper capture of the scene over a longer distance. With a tripod you can go f11 and then focus on the right plant and the rest will be in satisfactory sharpness but the accent or springboard of the viewer's eye will be with the main plant or palm on the right. You always seek to direct your viewer's eyes.
So very high marks for subject matter and congratulations on a very attractive capture. When you see distance always think a smaller aperture and your dreams will be better realized. |
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01/15/2006 12:53:42 AM |
greetings from the cririque club:
All photographers seek this type of image. That is a dramatic sky with luscious colors and then a lovely silhoutte to complement the composition. It is evident that you seek this beauty and this is perhaps the area where nobody can really you guide you. This is good you have this nice inborn talent.
The image has an immediate appeal as it has enough play to really accent the silhoutte parts of the image. All I can do here is express some minor ideas for exploration. The main thrust of the image is right heavy, that is it is here where the eyes find the most dynamic exchange between light and dark. Ir is also okay to leave the image balanced as is with more weight on the right. One item for exploration is the total inclusion of the right plant and then to close in a little on the left because the impact begins to diminish as the eye turns to the left. This attention on the right plant will help define this shape more to get closer to the challenge. I also notice a spec of light right on the left of the palm trees. Of course, in basic editing we are stuck with that, but little as this is it creates a minor distraction. Notice, this is minor.
Now, on the technical side you could have chosen to close the lens more. from 5.6 you can go to f8 and this would still leave 1/80. Of course, this would be an ideal tripod shot say at f11 at 1/40. This will allow a sharper capture of the scene over a longer distance. With a tripod you can go f11 and then focus on the right plant and the rest will be in satisfactory sharpness but the accent or springboard of the viewer's eye will be with the main plant or palm on the right. You always seek to direct your viewer's eyes.
So very high marks for subject matter and congratulations on a very attractive capture. When you see distance always think a smaller aperture and your dreams will be better realized.
Message edited by author 2006-01-15 00:57:58. |
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01/07/2006 06:33:37 AM |
| Dramatic plant shapes here..... |
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01/07/2006 06:03:15 AM |
| That's a pretty dramatic sky. I don't quite understand the title sorry |
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01/06/2006 04:22:38 PM |
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01/04/2006 03:32:24 PM |
| Shape of what? Nice photo but busy. Is that a horse barn? |
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01/04/2006 03:56:16 AM |
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01/04/2006 02:25:01 AM |
| The clouds to the left, just above the roof, look like a monkey's head or am I just loosing my mind! |
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