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01/08/2006 04:06:18 PM |
***Greetings from Critique Club***
First off, I'd like to start by saying congrats on your highest rated photo. Getting better and that's a good thing.
You hit the challenge here well and produced an image nobody could say did not meet the challenge.
As far as technicals go. Focus is good, exposure is perfect and lighting is dead on. You scored well on thise merits I'd suppose.
Now, how do we improve this photo? Well, for this particular photo it seems to be a hard thing. Perhaps creating a diagonal pattern by rotating the camera would have created more punch to the composition, but that's just my opinion ofcourse. Colored light inside the glass blocks might have added some punch, but that may have not been possible.
Only thing that really bothers me about your photo here is some artifacting. Perhaps a little too much USM or over-compression of the JPEG file.
But in the end, you recieved a respectable score and you are definitely improving, so keep up the good work. I hope to see more from you.
Take care,
Leroy
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01/03/2006 12:34:48 PM |
| It's good, but boring...And it's all centered. |
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01/03/2006 10:55:18 AM |
| Definitly a repeating pattern. This might have been different with a shadow behind, or a unique light source shining in from one of the corners. |
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01/02/2006 01:19:12 PM |
| Definately a patern here. I like it. |
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01/01/2006 12:36:53 AM |
| Good pattern, though without a specific focal point my eyes feel a little unguided and lost |
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12/31/2005 10:45:12 AM |
| Unique pattern, good colors and textures |
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12/30/2005 09:34:15 PM |
| great patterns here, well done................ |
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12/28/2005 08:33:12 PM |
| like so many things overlooked in life you never realize how beautiful they can be. great shot! |
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12/28/2005 02:39:51 PM |
| good mage and perfectly symetrical- well done |
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12/28/2005 11:11:36 AM |
| Beautifully balanced and nice light. |
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