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01/09/2006 05:23:09 AM |
** Greetings from the Critique Club **
The composition here is lacking in my mind. Perhaps if you shot this from another angle, and it was not so dead center that would be better.
I would also like to have seen a shallower DOF to blur out the busy background. Color balance and exposure seem okay.
- Linda |
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01/03/2006 01:14:51 AM |
| I'd like to see the larger version of this. |
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01/02/2006 12:29:22 PM |
| I like your idea. I wonder how this would look if taken from a different angle rather than straight on and if the busy background was blurred out? |
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12/30/2005 09:01:26 AM |
| background a little distracting to me. |
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12/29/2005 10:17:48 AM |
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12/29/2005 12:35:56 AM |
| I wonder if a different angle wouldn't have made this a more interesting picture. As it is, it seems a bit...well, ordinary, to me. |
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12/28/2005 10:47:03 PM |
| Opps, what a mess.............. |
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12/28/2005 10:45:50 PM |
| Very good, but would be better if it weren't so centered. |
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12/28/2005 12:26:25 PM |
| the background should be out of focus more |
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12/28/2005 11:21:37 AM |
| This is a little small, and would probably do a little better if it were bigger. But, as is, spot on for the challenge, the cropping is good, and the people in the background give it a very natural feel. 7 |
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