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Victory Over Mice
Victory Over Mice
Twyla


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Phobia (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Canon EOS-300D Rebel
Location: on the freezer
Date: Dec 18, 2005
Aperture: 4.5
ISO: 1600
Shutter: 1/20
Galleries: Candid, Advertisement
Date Uploaded: Dec 20, 2005

I chose to focus on the word "victory", not sure if it works.
the "grain" on the black area is texture of leather being lit up; sorry bout that.

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Place: 124 out of 144
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01/02/2006 10:40:18 PM
** Greetings from the Critique Club **

I honestly do not feel the focus being on the word Victory came across clear enough to get people to understand how this fit the challenge. After all, the image was supposed to convey the fear - not the remedy.
Technically, the lighting needs improvement as the harsh shadow off the cheese is distracting being in sharp contrast to the blown out cheese. The poor lighting would also account for the grain/noise of your background. I would have liked to see better focus overall.

- Linda
 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/27/2005 09:15:02 AM
Your photo is coming across as a grainy on my screen. Not a bad setup. I like the lighting. One point deducted for not having phobia name mentioned in title as dictated by challenge.
12/26/2005 06:46:39 AM
Great lightling. That you can't see the back of the trap really conveys being at the edge of a dark world of scary critters. Very creative.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/25/2005 12:01:31 AM
Doesnt really show a phobia...and it is a lil out of focus
12/24/2005 11:19:12 AM
Merry Christmas
12/22/2005 06:43:51 AM
Should have been in puns ...
12/21/2005 07:04:21 PM
Good lighting but lack of focus hurts
12/21/2005 06:31:12 PM
mi
12/21/2005 04:06:39 AM
Now lemme think ... this looks familiar
12/21/2005 02:44:58 AM
I see the mouse trap and I see the title... but there is no one here to be afraid of a mouse.


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