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01/03/2006 05:05:21 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Technically, you have done well with your shallow dof. I like the blurred/focus/blurred way you have set it up. Also, the colors are awesome.
Compositionally, it feels a little \"open\" to me. I think a tighter crop would help to focus the attention on the crayons better. Also, I find myself leaning to the right trying to see the points more. Maybe a sharper angle of incident between you and teh tips, so that the frame is filled more.
Overall, this is a well executed shot and fits the challenge.
Good work, and best to you in future challenges. Hang in there and I look forward to seeing your future submissions.
karmat |
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12/27/2005 08:26:36 PM |
| this would make a nice product shot. |
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12/27/2005 03:30:42 PM |
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12/27/2005 12:49:35 AM |
| Good shallow DOF............. |
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12/23/2005 09:30:49 AM |
| I like your concept and setup. I wonder how this would be with the foreground stick in focus rather than the middle ones. |
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12/21/2005 06:37:36 PM |
| Pencils (crayons?), books, and money seem to be a DOF theme... |
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