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Adam's Apple
Adam's Apple
loz1


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Visual Puns (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Canon EOS-300D Rebel
Lens: Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6
Location: Dinning Room Table - Melbourne, Australia
Date: Dec 17, 2005
Aperture: f/8.0
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/20
Galleries: Still Life, Studio
Date Uploaded: Dec 17, 2005

First I was going to do a shot of 'Fruit Flies' complete with various fruits with wings attached to them, but it wasn't happening for me. I started thinking of other fruit puns (as I had bought all this fruit to shoot lol) and I came up with Adam's Apple.

This shot was taken in the afternoon on the table in out dinning room. The lighting is 100% natural.

Editing:
* Neat image
* Levels
* Dodge and Burn
* Sharpen
* Hue and Saturation

Statistics
Place: 31 out of 144
Avg (all users): 6.0396
Avg (commenters): 8.3333
Avg (participants): 5.8171
Avg (non-participants): 6.1655
Views since voting: 3415
Views during voting: 435
Votes: 227
Comments: 5
Favorites: 1 (view)


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12/29/2005 11:00:02 PM
Hello from the Critique Club!

Cool pun idea and a good one to photograph. You did well with this and there are only a few things I might think about doing differently.

I think it might carry a bit more impact if it was cropped in closer so that there wasn't as much table showing...maybe having the apple moved a bit more onto the note.

The other thing I would do is have the note handwritten instead of typed...especially being from a woman. I think it would have added a bit more flare to the shot.

The only other thing might have been to have a "prettier" apple; one of those nice and photogenic shiny red ones :)

Lighting and focus both seem to be fine and colors are natural and very good. The idea is always the hardest part, and I think it's evident that some thought went into this one. Well done!

I hope this is helpful.

Judy
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/20/2005 04:52:02 AM
Great play on words again, with this dear Adam letter...............................
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12/19/2005 01:39:53 PM
=) Nice!!! Great idea!
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12/19/2005 01:28:59 PM
Perfect pun! 10.
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12/19/2005 12:19:18 PM
Haha, that's awesome. I'm sure you're scoring well with this one....nice job!
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