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Challenge: Say Cheese! (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Konica Minolta DiMAGE A200
Location: Living Room
Date: Dec 13, 2005
Aperture: f/11
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/6s
Galleries: Macro, Food and Drink
Date Uploaded: Dec 13, 2005

 Just looking for a nice simple composition with cheese.

Cropped heavily, noise removal, levels using black point in bottom left, saturation using selection on oarngy-red wax to make it more red, USM.

Statistics
Place: 24 out of 107
Avg (all users): 5.6630
Avg (commenters): 7.2800
Avg (participants): 5.3750
Avg (non-participants): 5.7364
Views since voting: 1382
Views during voting: 434
Votes: 276
Comments: 27
Favorites: 0

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 12/27/2005 07:06:43 PM
** Critique Club **
When I looked at the image, I didn't figure out what was it. I had to look up the title to make sense. The good part: You chose a very nice title. the bad part: Your photograph doesn't convey what it should.

I think if you had some more room on top and right to show the ends of the peeled off cheese part, it would be easy to understand what's going on.

Nice colors used. Red has recently become one of my fav. colors and you have used it very well.

if you have any questions feel free to pm me

-Gaurawa
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/20/2005 06:53:32 PM
Tad oof, to me, lighting could be a TOUCH better, both are MY opinion, I know, but nice outside the box thinking!!
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 12/20/2005 05:47:33 PM
Clever use of cheese.
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 12/20/2005 04:02:47 PM
Strong image. Well captured and processed. 8.
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 12/20/2005 03:07:36 PM
Oh what a great title. YUM - I love gouda. This is really well done.
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 12/20/2005 11:18:20 AM
I think this picture is awesome.
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 12/19/2005 08:12:02 PM
LOVE the caption! elegent shot.
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 12/19/2005 06:41:36 PM
I really like the abstractness of this shot, and the colours and lighting :)
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 12/17/2005 09:28:43 PM
I appreciate the humor.
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 12/16/2005 12:45:49 PM
One needs to think about this one to understand. I hope that your score doesn't suffer because of it. If you were to zoom-out/crop-less I think it would be more appearant that it's the wax strip of a chesse wheel.
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 12/16/2005 08:01:06 AM
The title is great.....
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 12/15/2005 08:02:53 PM
Great macro. My kids love this cheese. Great lighting.
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 12/15/2005 05:51:50 PM
What a cheesy idea!
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 12/15/2005 11:58:30 AM
What a fun idea! very nicely done too.
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 12/14/2005 10:26:43 PM
Takes a moment to see it. Not bad, but a little too close.
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 12/14/2005 09:57:26 PM
woo hoooo!
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 12/14/2005 09:54:20 PM
Very cute because the red plays well and the tiny expose cheese adds to the effect. Bumping up a notch for nice composition. This image would have been even better of the dof extended a little deeper so as to reach the opposite side of the cut. otherwise, it is nice.
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 12/14/2005 08:52:00 PM
Nice idea. The colour works well.
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 12/14/2005 04:50:07 PM
this could have been beter i think if you weren't in that close. Also, i find the reflection of light to intense, but good idea.
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 12/14/2005 03:31:56 PM
quite selected like composition, there is beautiful a transparance, a good clearness, lighting is quite selected
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 12/14/2005 10:42:12 AM
Very clever...
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 12/14/2005 10:31:55 AM
Nice, I ike it.
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 12/14/2005 09:24:21 AM
Beautiful.
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 12/14/2005 08:50:34 AM
heh
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 12/14/2005 05:53:12 AM
"Strip Cheese" would have been a more appropiate title, but a good photo just the same.........
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 12/14/2005 03:19:12 AM
It was gouda you to enter this, its so appeeling.
Nice macro work
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 12/14/2005 03:02:39 AM
Took me a while to figure out what is was.. A great idea, but might have been clearer if you'd shown the whole ball of cheese.
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