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You Can't See the Cheese Because It's in the Mouse That I Ate...
You Can't See the Cheese Because It's in the Mouse That I Ate...
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Challenge: Say Cheese! (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Konica Minolta DiMAGE X50
Location: Honolulu, HI
Date: Dec 13, 2005
Aperture: f 10.0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/125
Galleries: Abstract, Emotive
Date Uploaded: Dec 13, 2005

i'm obsessed with this cat, and it's a bit of a stretch.. i know i know. i didn't know what to do! i hate cheese. XD

Statistics
Place: 99 out of 107
Avg (all users): 3.5672
Avg (commenters): 3.1429
Avg (participants): 3.2545
Avg (non-participants): 3.6479
Views since voting: 688
Views during voting: 380
Votes: 268
Comments: 14
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/20/2005 05:57:06 PM
Doesn't meet the challenge .. no cheese. :(
12/19/2005 08:08:02 PM
did it swallow the spider to catch the fly too? i don't know why it swallowed the fly. perhaps it'll die...
12/17/2005 09:50:13 PM
I like the title.
12/17/2005 02:51:43 PM
Where's the cheese?
12/16/2005 09:33:33 PM
Say Cheese!: The old photographer's cliché is now a challenge topic. Use cheese as the subject of your photo to make your audience smile.

I hate to be playing English teacher here or come off as a DNMC critic, especially that English is NOT my native language but dissecting the description makes it pretty clear:
USE CHEESE as the SUBJECT of your photo to make YOUR AUDIENCE SMILE.

Based on the capitalized letters I had the following expectations in this challenge:
1. There would be cheese (even if implied) in the photo (Cheddar, Swiss, Gouda...etc). This cheese would be the SUBJECT of the photo. (Subject - Synonyms: matter, topic, theme. These nouns denote the principal idea or point of a speech, a piece of writing, or an artistic work.)

2. This is open to discussion but by Audience I would assume either the voters, or, someone in the photo looking at cheese

3. the photo would be somewhat funny as to make me smile.

After reviewing your photo, I feel it does not meet the challenge either because there is no cheese in the photo or because it's not funny. Or both. In this photo there's too much relying on your title. And even with the title it's not funny. It just looks like a sleeping cat in a locker room of some sorts.
12/16/2005 09:26:48 PM
This has a blue cast over the photo
12/16/2005 12:28:32 PM
That's a stretch... Nice shot though
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12/15/2005 11:09:52 PM
The title tries to explain it, but it doesn't excuse the fact that you didn't incorporate cheese in your photograph, which was a requirement of the challenge. Furthermore, the picture's not even "good"; the colors are horrible, and the composition is dull. The cat's adorable, though.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/15/2005 10:18:42 AM
weird blue color kills it - it also seems pretty off-topic i gave it a 3
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12/15/2005 08:46:22 AM
I like the title
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/14/2005 10:57:01 PM
there is a strange blue glow over the right side of this shot that is very distracting and the colors are all muted
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/14/2005 02:38:14 PM
Nice title!! Funny!!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/14/2005 08:46:22 AM
It's a good concept, but there are a few things wrong with this photo:

1) There's a blue cast to the whole thing.
2) The background is odd and doesn't add anything to the photo.
3) The lighting is poor.
4) There are sensor dust spots in the upper right corner.

I think this concept needed a little more development to make a better photo.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/14/2005 06:15:28 AM
and I do not see the smile of the cat!! Framing can be regarded as good, the light and the dominant blue one does not give a beautiful effect.
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