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12/26/2005 11:43:07 PM |
Critique Club here.
Nice idea, nice composition. A bit simple is my first impression. upon further study, the black BG is well done, but the cheese slice is not 'pretty' - it seems to be drying out and does not look very attractive. There is some sheen/hot spots on teh top edge and on the right side that seem out of place. So based on that and the rather flat color of the cheese i'd say the lighting could be better (more even, 1/2 stop brighter maybe). |
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12/16/2005 11:02:40 PM |
| Good work, and nice placment of the cheese. |
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12/16/2005 09:26:26 PM |
| Nice smiling cheese though I don't care much for the plain background. |
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12/14/2005 10:28:29 PM |
| Simple, yet irresistably cute. |
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12/14/2005 05:34:19 PM |
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12/14/2005 03:34:05 PM |
| Simplistic like idea, not of construction but a beautiful contrast enters the black and the yellow |
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12/14/2005 06:55:45 AM |
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12/14/2005 05:04:40 AM |
| I think this is clever............. |
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