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My Bag of Tricks
My Bag of Tricks
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Challenge: Free Study IX (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Nikon D70
Location: Plainfield IL
Date: Nov 28, 2005
Aperture: 10
ISO: 80
Shutter: 1/125
Date Uploaded: Nov 28, 2005

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Statistics
Place: 507 out of 519
Avg (all users): 4.1056
Avg (commenters): 4.5000
Avg (participants): 4.0097
Avg (non-participants): 4.3590
Views since voting: 576
Views during voting: 380
Votes: 284
Comments: 2
Favorites: 0


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12/07/2005 09:21:47 PM
too busy, too haphazard, too chaotic. there's nothing wrong with your technicals, it's just the composition that keeps this image from going anywhere.
12/06/2005 01:54:00 AM
I think this is a really good idea. The presentation though leaves me with a feeling of wanting a little more though. I'm thinking that the background seems just a little too busy and slightly distracting because of the changing color and textures. The composition could perhaps be a little more dynamic if the subject were framed on a vertical across the photo instead of just laid out on center. Also, although the pink bag is a nice color, I find interest in the makeup items and wish the focus was sharper there than as it is now, sharp on the pink bag. Maybe just a little deeper dof would make a difference. Like I said, I think you've chosen a good subject, that has interest, a good eye, good exposure on the shot. A little more care in the presentation could maybe make a considerable boost in the score. Just my opinion of course :-)
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