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10/23/2006 05:43:35 PM |
| .. i think besides the camera.... there's a lack in composition. too blurry... mm i dont know.. there's nothing attractive in this photograph. |
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11/29/2005 05:14:40 PM |
| Not very well composed or photographed. Sorry... |
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11/28/2005 04:49:42 PM |
| A little less light on the front one would be better and still have the effect. |
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11/27/2005 10:50:21 PM |
| yikes...pic is out of focus... the glare is distacting....picture isn't interesting...yada, yada, yada |
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11/27/2005 04:33:27 PM |
| not much of interest here. mundance subject, poorly lit, out of focus and drab background |
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11/27/2005 12:07:11 AM |
| Keep trying - needs better focus, more DOF, more sharpness. If you have macro capability, move closer, use a tripod, and stop down. Try for a more interesting arrangement, maybe the tails of state quarters. Highlights should retain detail, the exposure in the foremost quarter is blown out. |
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11/26/2005 09:40:38 AM |
| Not focused. Should be cropped. Closest coin overlit. |
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11/25/2005 11:28:45 PM |
nothing is in focus, one coin is severly over exposed
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11/25/2005 07:40:32 AM |
| Your symmetry is good, focus could have been better. I'm not sure about the glare on the one coin, it is distracting, but it also makes the coin distinctive again making it odd or different from the rest. I think a cooler WB would have helped here too. |
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11/25/2005 01:27:26 AM |
| The shot is quite blurry, and there's too much light on the bottom coin, so I gave a 4 on this. The table doesn't work well as a background, and also because it reflects light. It might have turned out better if placed on a cloth with a lighter colour that doesn't seem to blend in with the coin colour. |
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11/24/2005 07:56:32 AM |
| The choice of background was good for this shot, but sadly that's really where it ends. The light bounce off the front coin is too much and none of the coins are in focus. Also the composition is too centralised - it would have been better off to one of the sides. Nonetheless a good concept that would benefit from practising at. |
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11/23/2005 02:33:02 PM |
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 Photographer found comment helpful. |
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11/23/2005 11:39:11 AM |
| Out of focus and overexposed imho |
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11/23/2005 10:56:31 AM |
| I don't mean to be rude but this is horrible. Out of focus, lighting was horrible. |
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11/23/2005 09:52:43 AM |
| Too out of focus, and the bottom quarter is hardly recognizable. |
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11/23/2005 12:53:52 AM |
| good idea, but the focus is a little bit off, and the glare on the near quarter is a little too bright. Keep trying! :) |
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