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Challenge: Dead End (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 4800
Location: Memorial Hills Cemetery
Date: Nov 6, 2005
Galleries: Emotive, Black and White
Date Uploaded: Nov 6, 2005

 Cropped slightly, rotated 0.2 ccw, desaturated, burned a bit here and there.

Statistics
Place: 106 out of 173
Avg (all users): 5.2837
Avg (commenters): 6.5000
Avg (participants): 5.1600
Avg (non-participants): 5.3981
Views since voting: 669
Views during voting: 306
Votes: 208
Comments: 7
Favorites: 0

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 11/14/2005 11:32:16 PM
I didn't look at the comments before leaving my own. I gave this a 6 in the original voting. I think the composition is good with the Father being at the bottom. However, a tigher crop so there is less grass may have been good. Cut the picture just above the top of the leaves. You get grass to the left, but not too much. I'd also add just a touch more stone beneath the Father.

I'm finding a common theme among these pictures I'm commenting on and that is low contrast. I went into photoshop and think this pic has much more pop if you go into levels and change them to 20/1.00/215. This, in essence, adds contrast and I think it looks better.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/13/2005 04:09:18 PM
Nice shotting!
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 11/12/2005 05:05:47 PM
this is a very nice idea, but since you went to black and white this is my thought.

Blacks good, whites need work, great texture, good comp, good lighting, nice lines, good title
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 11/11/2005 09:54:28 PM
good photo
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 11/09/2005 01:29:56 PM
Nice, Emotive photo, well done.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 11/08/2005 11:57:25 PM
I like that the stone is off center and composed with the dead leaves and in black and white.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 11/08/2005 05:59:48 PM
Interesting take on the challenge and it works for me on a different level.
Perhaps a bit lighter in the highlights but otherwise a well done entry... :)
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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