I like the delicate tones of this shot although I wonder whether a crop in from the right might work as well, as I find that the darker tones around the right side draw attention away from the eye.
this photo really appeals to me for some reason. i love the idea of that doll's face peering out from behind the bubble wrap...such a soft and unexpected image.
The good: creative.
To work on: it's always nice to keep an eye unobstructed. Could you have composed with her eye right in one bubble? The lighting isn't very exciting.