This is a great concept for a "busy" photo. The two white dots (reflection?) on the red are distracting to me but overall I like the composition of the image.
Aww, good idea but the props are less than interresting. The phone is cheap and the bra is not very romantic. Two white spots on it disturbing. Finally the background is sterile. My suggestion: Find an old, romantic phone, finde a lacy bra and put the thing on a bed. Last but not least: use daylight from one source through curtains.