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11/13/2005 08:55:14 PM |
***Greeting from the Critique Club***
Lets start by, does this meet the challenge...yes, I think this is a great Transparency picture. Your exposure time is great, one of the best I've ever seen. The highlight on her chest looks really good. She is a very pretty model.
I can't find anything wrong with the picture. I think where you lost points with the voters is her head is cut off. But having her head in the picture you lose the focus on her chest. I guess it can go both ways. IMO
I hope my critique helps. Great job and a great picture!
Phillip
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11/06/2005 11:49:25 PM |
Returning for comments:
very nicely executed. |
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11/03/2005 09:33:41 PM |
| great concept and execution. |
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11/03/2005 10:26:29 AM |
| Love this one! Got a 9 from me! |
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11/02/2005 02:40:37 PM |
| There are a number of 'transparent people' shots in this challenge and this is by far and away my favourite. The amount of the exposure time devoted to the model seems to be absolutely spot-on. The right shoulder, for instance, completely covers the background, whereas the side of the body fades away smoothly. The texture of the background is conveyed well, too. |
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11/02/2005 02:05:46 PM |
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11/01/2005 02:23:29 PM |
| Nice "double exposure". I would have preferred a little less highlight on her chest, but maybe that is required to give her more "substance" (ie block the background). 7 |
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10/31/2005 09:00:46 PM |
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10/31/2005 08:53:04 PM |
| I like it. Good black and white image. I would have liked to have seen her entire head, but again, well done. |
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10/31/2005 07:53:52 PM |
| nice fade effect with your model. |
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10/31/2005 02:57:14 PM |
| Well done this looks good |
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10/31/2005 02:17:49 AM |
| Stunning.. love the detail on the dress and the wall... |
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