I think that the reflection of the shed (or is it a fence?) in the window pane top left rather drowns out the face and overpowers the rest of the shot.
Your photo is one of those for which the viewer can create a story - with or without the help of your title. I like that aspect. I wish the reflective lines on the left side were a bit less pronounced, especially through her face, but overall...well done and good luck in the challenge. 7