Whew, somebody better hurry up!! ............Great picture!! Love the Background and all the dark, really adds to the shot. Love her expression, color and softness in her face. Very nice!!
The good: Nicely lit. No reflection on the umbrella, that probably took some work.
To work on: Well, the subject isn't all that interesting. Without the title, it doesn't send much message.
Good title. It goes along well with her look. It's a bit too dark in the bottom right for me, and I'm not sure what the highlighted abject is near her hand, but good photo.