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11/04/2005 11:38:39 PM |
very nice idea using a camoflauge effect. However try using a tripod for florals, their details are hard to capture when shooting handheld. I like your lighting, maybe a tad more would of worked..nice try..
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11/01/2005 07:30:52 AM |
| Didn't like the grain on this one. |
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10/29/2005 11:23:28 PM |
4 - Like the potential here. Criticism; in my opinion the gardenias are getting lost on the 'fabric background' - by the 'focal point' (seems that the embroidery in the fabric is sharper (may just be the coloring though)) than on the gardenias and, that the embroidery is too dominant for this shot. Either 'further back' or else more of a macro, to get the focus on (especially tips of) the gardenias, along with a more 'bland'/less 'busy' background (but obviously still white re the Challenge) would have made this a better shot in my opinion. Perhaps even a different 'composition' of the flowers, especially that top one, so the three were more 'uniform'. edit:typo
Message edited by author 2005-11-02 00:25:34. |
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10/28/2005 08:27:26 PM |
| Good concept and nice triangular composition with the flowers. If there was a bit more sharpness overall and maybe a bit less blue saturation, I would have scored it higher. |
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10/27/2005 10:56:02 AM |
| colors are off, background too dark for a true white |
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10/26/2005 03:00:44 PM |
| I think a solid white background would have looked better. |
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10/26/2005 12:55:01 AM |
| flowers are not fresh,it looks more like a snapshot. |
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