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This is a nice photo. It has all the elements of a good landscape: dramatic perspective; depth; areas of foreground, midground, and background; attractive color; a focal point (the birds). Composition is fine; although I'd prefer a bit more sky, I like the wide format. But it doesn't have anything to lift it above the crowd of everyday photos and give it real impact. I'm not sure just what to suggest here. Maybe sharper overall focus, especially the water. Maybe more contrast in the midground trees, which seem to have lots of interesting textures and colors, but it's too subtle here to be interesting. I don't think the grain/noise was an asset here; it makes the photo look muddy rather than contributing to a mood. |
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