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11/05/2005 06:02:09 PM |
Critique Club
Nice composition. Your have two problems here that I see at first glance. Not enough detail in the mouth and nose areas they are just too washed out and flat. Second problem I am seeing is the focus on the rhinestones nearest the camera. You apparently used to shallow of a dof here.
You did well meeting the challenge and I personally like this. Hope to see more from you in the future.
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10/28/2005 11:12:07 PM |
| Ooohh.. such a haunting feeling! Very nicely captured. Excellent composition. |
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10/27/2005 11:35:58 AM |
| lost definition on the mask in both the nose and mouth area, wish the dark lines were not there |
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10/26/2005 02:45:42 PM |
| Interesting idea, could use a little more contrast in the area from the nose down to bring out the contours just a bit more. |
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