Greetings from the Critique Club
Nice take on the challenge, but it has it flaws. I'm going to start by saying the PANELING...that line on the wall just distracts from your models beauty, it tends to pull the eye from her to it.
As for the pose and one boot just isn't eye pleasing. A different pose such as both hands on the wall feet apart as if being frisked by police or a different shoe might have solved the awkwardness here im seeing.
Your lighting seems to be good as does your focus. Its the silly things you overlook that hurt you during a challenge.
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