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11/01/2005 11:19:37 AM |
critque club**
the shot is not very eye catching, no pun intended ;)
anyway, first things first. when trying to shoot a picture espically with a P&S always avoid shooting directly in light the light source is very distracting..i suggest moving your subject over to completly cover up the light source so it creates what I love as a rim of light over the edge. its a beautiful effect!
now onto the main subject.
the entire image is very soft, that means its not sharp like it needs to but since it is a p&s, not much you had to work with..although i love your idea in this picture it lacks the reflection needed to earn you a higher spot in this category. like i said, the lighting would have also helped out dramatically.
your title is very creative, perhaps you should help me name my pictures for future contests! |
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10/25/2005 06:10:07 PM |
| i can't quite make out what's reflected in her eye...just the two red spots. what is it? |
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10/25/2005 07:25:56 AM |
| The idea is excellent, I must say. Should it have been me behind the camera I would have positioned the model differently though... Say slightly more to the left and maybe looking upwards reflecting a tall building in the city or some bird, tree of flower with a contrasting colour to the eyes if taken in the countryside because one cannot really admire the colour of her eyes. But anyways that's me... Good job ;-) |
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10/24/2005 02:28:16 AM |
| not enough reflection, which is too bad, because it looks interesting. Is that a car I see? |
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10/24/2005 01:09:42 AM |
| Interesting picture, I like the concept. The reflection is a bit difficult to see, maybe move to catch more of the eye. That will eliminate the blown sky in the background too. |
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10/23/2005 08:14:54 PM |
| A good concept, but for me the reflection is so small it's hard to discern - except the two red lights. |
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10/23/2005 05:12:44 PM |
| looks more like the like the reflection of taillights. Not enuf wrinkles to be called ageing. Your model blinked. |
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10/20/2005 05:03:44 PM |
| Good title, really wanted to see it, but just didn't find it in your image. |
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10/19/2005 08:03:10 PM |
| Would have liked to see more of the eye reflection. |
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10/19/2005 04:09:07 PM |
| Nice idea, but better if not not centered. ("Bullseye!") |
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