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10/06/2005 10:09:31 PM |
| I would have left all the color in. Just me. |
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10/06/2005 06:24:03 PM |
| Looks like she has lipstick on. I think real bright red lipstick could have made the photo a littl more dramatic. |
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10/06/2005 09:26:17 AM |
| Composition could have been improved if there was more red injected into the picture. The pose is just fine, that I would definately keep. But with the green apple you really needed to play up the complementary color of red and that could have been done with a red dress/shirt, red lipstick, and nails painted a deep red color -thus it would invoke not only the imagery associated with the eating of the apple at Eden but also the apple that Snow White ate (only with an inverse in color since the apple was red - different but still good to be a little different in approach since the color green symbolizes spring/fertility/renewal). |
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10/06/2005 07:59:07 AM |
| There seems to be a blue cast on the picture. I think that it would have been more effective if the mouth was redder (lipstick?). And maybe pursed lips would have been better than the open mouth. |
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10/05/2005 03:10:14 PM |
| I think her lipstick should have been true red. |
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10/05/2005 02:48:54 PM |
| This image needs more pink. Maybe a pink shirt, more tongue, pink fingernail polish. The blue dominates the pink, thereby causing the green and pink to lose impact. Nice comp, clear image. |
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10/05/2005 12:06:31 PM |
| Good Picture, love the apple. Might have cropped tighter from the left to really bring out the color in the lips. |
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