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06/17/2003 09:52:44 PM |
| Thanks for all the Critiques. |
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06/17/2003 08:13:57 PM |
*Critique Club*
The very first thing I notice here is that the focus is really soft. I'm actually not really seeing a sharp point of focus.
The lighting hurts mostly, but I do like the little star reflections inside the glass. I don't like the bottom side of the glass because it's really bright, and the glare is white and distracting. Usually when I use flash, the focus turns out to be a bit nicer, but it doesn't seem to be the case in your situation.
The background is good. Nothing distracting in the background. I think though that the glare near the bottom ON the background is a bit distracting, but that isn't the background itself.
Definately liquid. Meets the challenge just fine. I wonder if a different angle would have helped to reduce the glare. For the look of the photo, I think the angle is good though. Also, a little trick I use with my camera is i put a white plastic cup over the flash, and it seems to help a little on glares.
Overall, an interesting idea. With better focus and lighting, I think that this would be something neat.
~Heather~ |
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06/10/2003 02:21:18 PM |
| Cleanup aisle 9 cleanup aisle 9.... Interesting perspective on a splash. Lighting seems a bit harsh and flash-like. |
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06/07/2003 10:58:30 PM |
| You and several others came up with the same thing. The thing I see here is that it is not a clear picture. More focus would help it a lot. |
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06/07/2003 06:20:47 PM |
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06/07/2003 02:57:58 PM |
| I can see what you're trying to accomplish, and the star filter works well here. I wish the focus were a bit better. |
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06/06/2003 11:26:09 AM |
| All those specular highlights are distracting to the point of being annoying. Had you shot the photo from a different angle, you would have lessened that problem. |
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06/05/2003 12:50:36 PM |
| Your flash didn't do you well at all. |
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06/04/2003 09:15:13 PM |
Cool...looks like it almost got your lens. ;>)
nice capture...
JB |
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06/04/2003 11:23:38 AM |
| Nice splash, though a bit out of focus. Might have been better with external lighting. |
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06/04/2003 01:22:22 AM |
| good pic, and idea. glare on bottom portion of pic is kind of distracting. and i think i see the reflection of your flash in the coke |
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