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One, Two, Three, I see a bee
One, Two, Three, I see a bee
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Challenge: Rule of Thirds (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Pentax *ist DS
Lens: Tamron AF 70-300mm f/4.0-5.6 LD for Pentax
Location: Victoria, BC
Date: Sep 16, 2005
Aperture: 5.4
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/250
Galleries: Macro, Floral
Date Uploaded: Sep 16, 2005

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Place: 181 out of 354
Avg (all users): 5.3151
Avg (commenters): 6.1667
Avg (participants): 4.9600
Avg (non-participants): 5.5725
Views since voting: 863
Views during voting: 321
Votes: 238
Comments: 7
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
09/27/2005 11:48:15 PM
clever title! beautiful colors! great idea! 7
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09/26/2005 12:00:07 PM
Nice soft yellow tones and lighting. A very greeting card moment!
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09/24/2005 05:39:07 PM
good capture, meets challenge, like the muted colours
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09/22/2005 12:57:41 AM
beautiful flowers, would be nice if you could see the bee better.
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09/22/2005 12:18:44 AM
I have to look twice to make sure this is a bee.
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09/21/2005 09:39:05 PM
5 - Good potential, nice colors. Criticism; while it seems you have met the Challenge with the 'rule' (but I am not 'expert'), I would like to see a more precise 'placement' using the rule. Also, the focal point needs to be 'higher', as the 'bottom' of the bee, and the flower under it and left have the focus. This does not look 'natural' to me, (if it is my apologies), but the bee looks dead, and placed - if so, then a better 'positioning' and angle would have made this a better shot in my opinion. The soft lighting coupled with the 'yellows' and 'creams' is nice, but the darkness underneath detracts in my opinion to the 'feel' of this shot. Mainly the focal point(s) for me need addressing here, and that 'dark gap'. Up to 5 from 4 for potential.
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09/21/2005 07:50:13 PM
...four, fix six, since my name's not Kevin, I'll give you a seven (corny? thought so)
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