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09/22/2005 05:57:20 PM |
Critique Club Comment
Mr. Sje, there he is.
I thought it would be easy to critique the Portraits from this Challenge, but it isn't.
This is a good portrait and I think you can be happy with the result, but you also would like to know my vision on why it didn't ribbon I guess.
Well, off course I can only guess. So here's my best shot.
The lighting is OK, but not realy spectacular, lets say a bit flat, it's not bad, but could be improved by just a little more shadow.
The nose is a bit too highlighted for my taste and my eyes get drawn to it, away from the eyes.
The cut-off chin is also a bit distracting, the forehead is no problem, but I personally don't like cut of chins.
On my monitor the skin color also looks a bit yellow. But that off course could also be my monitor.
Ok, enough about what I don't like, on to praise you.
I think it was brave to send in a portrait of a man.
In the top 10 there are only 2 men and 8 girls. The safer bet would have been a girl.
So I salute you for your choice. The eyes are very good captured, ok, they could be a bit more bright (you can photoshop them) but they are sharp and full of detail.
So all in all I would say this is a well done portrait.
Congrats.
Peter |
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09/17/2005 07:16:24 AM |
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09/17/2005 02:42:44 AM |
| I think this would have been better had the crop been in portrait instead of landscape. The eyes are a great feature of this image. 5 |
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09/14/2005 11:09:53 PM |
| hmmm one model two photos :> |
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09/14/2005 08:21:27 PM |
| great image with lots of personality... might have brought out the eyes a bit more but otherwise very well done... :) |
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09/14/2005 07:30:44 PM |
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09/14/2005 06:50:09 PM |
| Although cut off at the top and bottom....it still works. Nice job. |
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09/13/2005 10:46:27 PM |
| I like the lighting. I wish there was a bit more of the chin or head (he looks a little...squished to me), but I think it's good. |
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09/13/2005 10:25:08 PM |
| I like the expression on his face and the composition. I wonder what it would look like if we could see his chin? |
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09/12/2005 06:42:16 PM |
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09/12/2005 03:16:34 PM |
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09/12/2005 02:44:16 PM |
| Where have I seen him before?? Nice close shot of an interesting face, good exposure. |
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09/12/2005 01:02:13 PM |
jáhá... 2x sje... misnotkun á fallegum bakgrunni og góðum lömpum :P
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09/12/2005 04:28:23 AM |
| Good shot, just a the crop is a bit tight on the face. |
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09/12/2005 02:35:08 AM |
| Good picture. I think it would be better with a different background to compliment his eyes. Was he expecting this photo? I can't help but laugh with him. |
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09/12/2005 01:17:06 AM |
| Not a bad portrait. The lighting could use a bit of work. I could be wrong though..I do like highkey portraits. Good luck. |
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