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09/18/2005 11:55:22 PM |
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09/18/2005 11:08:02 PM |
| hmm i think the way the light was positioned or how this shot was exposed made you lose a lot of contrast in the face. i see you might have been trying to go for the high key effect. but the lighting sort of takes away all shadows which take away the 3d ness of the shot |
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09/15/2005 10:32:21 PM |
| To my untrained eye the first thing I saw was how in focus her eyes are and how soft or out of focus the rest of her is. I like the overall color though. |
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09/15/2005 05:21:25 AM |
| titile looks funny - only if I would know what that meant. |
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09/14/2005 07:15:03 PM |
| I love this kind of shot. |
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09/14/2005 06:54:03 PM |
| Excellent.....love the fade out into the background. Her eyes are the focus and although the image is rather soft...it works. Nice job. |
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09/14/2005 12:07:49 AM |
| Nice composition. The softness adds much to the shot, 10. |
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09/13/2005 03:40:53 PM |
| This looks like a sepia portrait with green eyes instead of a color portrait. |
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09/13/2005 02:04:39 PM |
A couple of suggestions I would give for this one. The overall feel, while I'm sure is meant to be soft, also feels out of focus to me. I think a big part of that is from the large fall of hair on her shoulder that is all out of focus.
The eyes also seem dark. The muted tones can work, but I would still like to see more lightness in the whites of the eyes. As it is, the whites almost match the skin tone, which really loses the focus on them. The muted tones also seem to make the bottom rim of the eyes kinda pink, like she's been crying or something.
Just one woman's opinion but I hope this is helpful.
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09/12/2005 02:24:48 PM |
| A little too soft for my taste, but a nice capture. I like the direct look at the camera. |
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09/12/2005 11:49:25 AM |
| Very nice portrait, but it's too obvious the eye didn't get the same post-processing than the rest of the photo, and I think it's kind of disturbing .... |
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09/12/2005 09:20:47 AM |
| I think I would have like to have seen it a bit sharper. Your model is stunning with gorgeous green eyes. Nice shot overall! 6 |
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09/12/2005 05:18:46 AM |
| A bit soft for my taste, but you're the photog, not me! Good portrait all the same. |
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