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The Flute Player
The Flute Player
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Color Portrait (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Canon EOS-300D Rebel
Lens: Canon EF 28-135mm F/3.5-5.6 IS USM
Location: Temple of Heaven, Beijing
Date: Sep 10, 2005
Aperture: f/9
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/15s (IS on)
Galleries: Performance, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Sep 10, 2005

 A group of musicians were playing at the Temple of Heaven as I was leaving, and this guy (as far as I could tell) was really good.

I'm not sure if this qualifies as a 'portrait' really but I haven't entered a challenge in a while, and I like the picture. I'm afraid, though, that its a little too 'dirty' looking.

PP:
In RSE:
Fill Light and Highlight Contrast both to 100
Shadow Contrast to 35
Saturation to 4
Sharpness to 50
In PS:
Levels: Right slider brought in a little bit on all channels
Brightness/Contrast: Contrast +10 Bright -5
Rotate/Crop
Gaussian Blur: .2
Cloned out a yellow distraction on left side
Dodged/Burned/Cloned skin to fix highlights
Burned Edges to bring eyes into frame
Also had to do a slight perspective/skew to get the red verticle line completly verticle.

Statistics
Place: 74 out of 284
Avg (all users): 5.8322
Avg (commenters): 6.6667
Avg (participants): 5.6000
Avg (non-participants): 6.0245
Views since voting: 910
Views during voting: 427
Votes: 298
Comments: 14
Favorites: 1 (view)

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 09/22/2005 12:59:56 AM
*** Critique Club ***

First Impression: Well balanced, good capture of the musician's expression, good skin tone and good overall contrast.

Composition: The person is positioned well within the frame though due to the length of the flute the crop may be just slightly too tight on the left.

Exposure: Seems bang on as the skin tone seems right and the colours appear natural.

Impact: I can almost hear the music.

Distraction: Red wall on the left.

Overall this image is well done and with some minor adjustments to the composition could be made better.

Keep shooting.

Colette
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
09/17/2005 03:40:32 AM
I like the style. It's simple yet there's a lot to see.
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 09/14/2005 08:13:31 PM
Great image... perhaps more candid than portrait but very well done... :)
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 09/14/2005 03:30:57 AM
Really nice capture, normally I would think the background was too much, but in this case I feel the colors and textures blend to enhance the overall photo. 10
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 09/13/2005 10:57:49 PM
Nice job. The coloring is great.
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 09/13/2005 04:48:43 PM
Great colors!
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 09/13/2005 03:28:11 PM
Nice setup and background good even though it´s rather busy, nice texture, overall really good..
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 09/13/2005 03:13:07 PM
intense concentration, good colors
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 09/13/2005 12:25:21 PM
I think this is a good portrait but the background is very distracting.
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 09/13/2005 07:40:26 AM
Love the painting-like quality. Nice tones. Lighting captured the intense expression to perfection - 10.
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 09/13/2005 05:31:08 AM
This looks like a picture by someone in my favourites list! Exposure, colour, contrast is very good. You have captured the expression and the mood perfectly. I hope this does well!
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 09/12/2005 08:50:46 PM
Nice portrait. He seems happily lost in the music...Wish I could hear it. :-)
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 09/12/2005 05:43:48 PM
Caught some great expression.
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 09/12/2005 04:20:40 AM
Nice shot, just a couple of things... the different colored background distracts a bit and having the eyes closed also seems to take away from the impact. I know this is a candid portrait, but just a couple thoughts. Maybe changing the angle a bit could change what is in the background or shooting in sequence mode would help capture the eyes open.
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