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09/20/2005 09:18:02 PM |
Greetings from the critique club
Composition
You found a nice subject, something different. Makes we want to look closer to find out what it is. With this subject and background, following the 'rule of thirds' might have been better, instead of a centred composition.
Camera Work
I assume this was taken handheld? It appears a bit fuzzy. Opening the aperture down one step could have helped.
Processing
Some extra sharpening would have helped.
Looking at your other challenge entries, I can say you have a keen eye. Keep shooting, keep experimenting and enjoy your ride at dpchallenge! |
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09/13/2005 09:37:28 PM |
| wow... colors are cool and the idea is really cool |
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09/13/2005 08:58:20 PM |
im drawn to the cones in the center i see no branch
still cool pic |
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09/13/2005 10:33:57 AM |
| Looks kinda like a starburst effect. Very neat! |
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09/11/2005 12:17:09 AM |
| I love the immediacy and vividness of the image |
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09/09/2005 10:54:11 AM |
| subject is nice and crisp but background seems to be in just enough focus to detract from foreground making it hard to see the details in the needles. |
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09/09/2005 06:14:52 AM |
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09/08/2005 09:26:53 PM |
| Exciting point of view with the needles splaying out across most of the photo. I like the colors too. |
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09/08/2005 08:31:17 PM |
| I don't like the placement. Colors are rich, though. |
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09/07/2005 01:04:50 AM |
| I like the picture; background is a little bit distracting |
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