Greetings from the Critique Club Rob,
Congrats on your first entry! You received a pretty low score and all your comments are positive, which doesn’t help you to do much to improve.
The background sets a great mood. The black borders, the grain and the specs give it a worn out/used feel to it. The subject just isn’t strong enough to carry the photo though. Maybe a branch with more interest would help? I know there is not much exciting about a branch, but with a background like this you set a great mood to tell a story and the branch just didn’t do it for most people.
Hope this helped. Feel free to PM me if you have any questions.
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