Critique Club
First Impression:
Nice minimalisitic photograph.
Nice contrast in color.
A bit flat in processing.
Composition
I like how its off centre horizontally. A different vertical crop might look better - perhaps place the central object in the lower third. Maybe even crop closer to make the subject a bit larger.
Processing
You mention that you slightly desaturated the orange. It seems a little too flat now. Maybe boost the orange saturation back up a little. Also, could sharpen some more.
Good luck in the future!
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