Good title. Fits challenge. Too much left to be desired. That branch sticking in on the right totally doesn't belong. The boys clothes are really distracting.
Some pointers... If the kids are the subject of the photo, you may want to have them look at you, but you must be able to see both faces. Here it seems like they are posing for someone else and you jumoed in and took a shot.
Photos of people need to have something to make them interesting. If you don't know these kids there is nothing interesting here. An expession, a smile, lighting, an action, something more then just posing in a tree.
Technically wise, the photo lacks crispness and is possibly overexposed.
This photo is way overexposed. The kids are kind of pinkish too. I can't see one boy's eyes, if you're taking a picture of someone's face it is most important that you can see their eyeballs.
For me, the lighting is a bit bright and it's unfortunate that the one boy has his arm across his face...and I'm curious as to what or who they are looking at. :-)
Unfortunately the two boys are a bit low in the frame. THe lower of the two has his arm across his eyes meaning we can't see his face. It's generally a goo idea to avoid severing a limb at a joint (ankle, knee, wrist etc) and try to crop halfway along a bone. Focus and exposure are good.
Good idea and it certainly meets the challenge. I would tweak the colors a little. It's too bad the boy on the bottom has his arm in front of his face.
It would be ironic if the logo on that shirt was from a playstation game. The composition would be vastly improved if the two boys were fully in shot and the interaction between them and the branches was the entire subject. Some canopy in the top of the frame (think rule of thirds) would work, but there's far too much at the moment.
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