This is perfect. I'm trying really hard to find something to give advice on but everything works out perfectly. The composition is nice, the tight framing right on spot. The grain gives a nice, sad and moody effect, that as Rob kind of prooved it, can't be without. The B&W is a nice choice, it's hard to image this picture in colour, I really do thing that would not have the same effect. And as for the cloud, above her head. I just have to say that that's wonderful, it's magnificently placed. Did you wait for it to go there? I mean it just leaves it so much to interpretation! For one thing you could say that it's the girls soul, flying off. or maybe the dead's soul flying past the praying girl. The wind blowing on the girl's hair is just a fabulous detail. This is perfect as it is and I can't keep myself from faving it. |