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09/05/2005 11:30:22 PM |
| I don't get the title "To be wear", some kind of a pun? But a worse problem is that there is no structure to the composition. The jumble is obviously your point, but there's nothing to catch the eye. Also some of the whites are blown and the DOF is in that awkward stage of almost containing the whole scene, but not quite. |
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09/03/2005 10:39:30 PM |
Chaos shoes everywhere :) Cool
Good luck! :) |
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09/02/2005 09:25:50 AM |
| A little too much disorder in this pic for me. I would have liked to have seen it composed a bit differently. |
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09/01/2005 11:01:55 AM |
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09/01/2005 06:52:25 AM |
| It is mayhem. Just doesn't translate into a good picture for me. I like the title..well..there are so many things to like about the title. The photo seems forced. I am beginning to believe that "shoes" maybe the most difficult to photo subject |
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08/31/2005 11:44:51 PM |
| Error in your title: "wear" should be "worn." Photo not really saying anything to me. 2 |
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08/31/2005 05:03:30 PM |
| There's no direction in the composition. It's all over the place, and you're eye isn't directed to anything at all. It just seems like an untidy pile os shoes. |
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