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09/13/2005 09:53:58 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
This pleasant image fits the Challenge well. The sandals look as if they were photographed at a beach on a nice sunny day.
I wonder if it would help this image to crop the upper and right sides a bit tighter to the sandals. There is some color to the right, but it is indistinct and more of a distraction than a help. I'd also suggest you consider adding interest to the image by introducing color to the plank or nearer the shoes.
Finally, while the image is reasonably sharp, if you could either brace your camera or in some other way steady it and get those sandals and the sand in them tack-sharp, it would make the image pop.
Still, your image meets the challenge easily and well and it's undoubtedly a good memory of a nice day at the beach. |
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09/06/2005 02:54:26 PM |
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09/05/2005 08:18:06 PM |
| Great composition and use of light. Like the sandels on the wooden beam with the sand . There is a nice feel to this image. Good luck |
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09/05/2005 06:48:53 PM |
| Yes they are, not sure how strong a photo they make in this setting though |
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08/31/2005 08:07:30 PM |
| i like the lighting and the sand box nice picture |
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08/31/2005 09:13:51 AM |
| Technically it is a good picture, but there is nothing that really draws the attention from the viewer. |
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