Composition could benefit from 3rds. It's very grainy and out of focus. Everything seems a bit blue except the buildings in the background. Not sure of the circumstances surrounding the photo so It's hard to tell what went wrong if anything. This coulod be exactly what you were going for. Needed a bit of info on the shot and idea behind it for a more in depth critique.
This appears grainy, but maybe you meant it to have that texture .It just seems a little rough on the eyes. i like the way you captured the buildings in the background, they actually make it more interesting.
center composition sometimes works, but not in this image. the colors are all blend together. Depending on the lighting conditions, would like to see this shot again and maybe use a polorized filter to get more contrast in the blues, need to get the trees/city/hills more inline as far as color, looks a little out of focus, not sure how much it was cropped........ ......4
there is a lot of grain and a slight color cast in this frame. the white balnce is set very wrong and nothing is in very sharp focus. it almost look like it was taken in auto mode or program mode. the center waited compostion is completly breaking the rule of thirds and makes this frame look like nothing more than a snapshot. 1
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