My eyes are wandering all over this shot. I'm made to think that the strong diagonals (legs) are suposed to be leading my eyes somewhere, but they don't. They lead out of the top of the photo and lead into the grass. If the swings are suposed to be the main focus, than the legs are quite distracting. If the legs are suposed to be the main focus, than I think that the swings add too much noise for them to be really very interesting. The building in the back is incomplete and doesn't really add anything to this shot either.
I do like how you have put the little fence in the bottom right corner, I think it gives me something solid to look at, but still it doesn't lead anywhere, and doesn't seem to have a major purpose.
Your focus and clarity are ok. And the lighting seems to have no major flaws. Just doesn't really peak my interest much. It feels really incomplete, as there isn't really anything that is totally in the photo.
Hope this helps.
~Heather~ |
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