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09/11/2005 08:13:33 AM |
well it took a second to figure out what this was a picture of. I think the image could have been more interesting with a little more context. perhaps more of the chain or cable holding the hook. I think it also could be improved by framing the image with the hook off to one side. You have an interesting texture on the ground to work with but, yeah i think lke i said before, i need a little more context to make it interesting for me. I also wonder if you over sharpened this image a bit. It looks like it was a bit soft (blurry) to start with and you gave it a healthy dose of unsharp mask or similar. Good start, and welcome to DPC.
-from the critique club- |
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09/02/2005 09:37:17 PM |
| I wouldn't have gotten loneliness out of this. The colors work well. |
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09/02/2005 04:20:08 PM |
| nice record shot, the hook seems a little soft and with the lack of shadows the is no real drama. |
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09/01/2005 01:57:48 PM |
| Sorry, I miss the connection... I get the drought, but loneliness? |
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08/31/2005 06:02:01 PM |
| i'm not really sure why a hook would be lonely?? |
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08/30/2005 09:46:38 AM |
| im not sure how this fits your title, and the focual point being in the center of the frame makes this nothing but a snapshot. |
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08/30/2005 12:18:02 AM |
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08/29/2005 11:26:27 PM |
| at first i thought it was a turd |
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08/29/2005 09:40:45 PM |
| technically well done. maybe having the hook more to the right and have more dead space for the drought......6 |
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08/29/2005 07:13:46 PM |
This would have been cool in BW
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08/29/2005 02:04:43 AM |
| I see drought but loneliness is a far stretch for an image with nothing sensate in it... |
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