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09/13/2005 11:26:00 AM |
*Critique Club*
Techniclly this photo is excellent. The lighting is solid and even, no nasty shadows or blown highlights. The focus is sharp, and the depth of field keeps the shoes in focus but separates them from a blurred background.
Compositionally it could use a little tweaking if you like to follow the rules. The rule of thirds suggests placing the focal point off-centre in your frame. If you were to draw tic-tac-toe lines over the image, the focal point should land on one of the 4 points where the lines intersect. It helps add context and balance to the image. of course rules can be broken, but in this case i think off-setting the shoes would add some interest, and give the viewer a better idea of where to look. Context (elements other than the subject itself) can provide a great deal of interest to a photo.
The comment Caine made below speaks to that idea as well. Zoom out a little and give the viewer more details to help finish off the idea...particularly in light of your title.
Overall it's a competent photo, but lacks a real message or WOW that will garner higher scores at DPC.
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09/03/2005 09:07:05 PM |
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09/03/2005 05:51:28 AM |
| There could be a lot more going on in this image. There doesn't seem to be any dialogue with the viewer beyond: "here's my shoes which I just placed on this step". There's nothing in the picture to indicate change. |
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08/31/2005 06:36:01 PM |
| lighting dull might have concentrated on interesting laces |
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08/31/2005 12:42:36 PM |
| Good setup and background. I'm not 100% sure what I'm looking at here... are the shoes about to leap off? What is it that they are positioned on? |
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08/31/2005 11:13:53 AM |
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