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Milk, It Does a Body Good...
Milk, It Does a Body Good...
JonLud


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Dairy (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT
Location: Home
Date: Aug 23, 2005
Aperture: f/8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1
Galleries: Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Aug 23, 2005

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Statistics
Place: 264 out of 284
Avg (all users): 3.9179
Avg (commenters): 3.0000
Avg (participants): 3.6620
Avg (non-participants): 4.0577
Views since voting: 745
Views during voting: 766
Votes: 402
Comments: 16
Favorites: 0


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09/06/2005 05:14:47 AM
Greetings from the Critique Club.

Composition:

The composition is good, the placement of the model in the frame accentuates the midsection which I am assuming was your intention since that is where the milk is.

Background:

I don't think this background color works because it is to close to the model's skin color. Perhaps something darker would have worked better, it would have given the picture a bit more overall contrast.

My opinion:

To be honest, this picture doesn't really do much for me. To me, it doesn't really meet the challenge. I think that if you had used the theme "milk" in a bit more obvious way, this would have done better.

If you have any questions or comments about this critique please feel free to PM me.

June

 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/30/2005 08:05:16 PM
I can not really see the milk and I am distratced by the zebra stripes
08/30/2005 02:05:14 PM
Is that milk running down her stomach? Can't quite figure it out.. not super crazy about this one, and it all looks slightly blurry.
08/29/2005 11:48:55 PM
Apparently milk does a lot of bodies good.
08/27/2005 01:01:20 PM
Fit Challenge Criteria: 0/2
Contrast/Color: 1/2
Composition: 1/2
Photo Quality: 1/2
My Subjective Affinity: 0/2
08/26/2005 07:16:35 PM
I like the color of the bathing suit. The picture itself is kind of boring.
08/25/2005 10:01:22 PM
i wish that the milk would have been a bit more visible. Seeing more of the milk actually spilling/pouring would have been nice to. Too bad there wasnt more of a difference of color between the body and the background.
08/25/2005 08:25:49 PM
I get how it's kind of dairy-related (because of the title) but I don't find it interesting. It's a little creative but if there was maybe a little more dairy, or if it fit more I would've scored higher.
08/25/2005 08:19:59 PM
There's hardly any dairy in this photo and I don't like how you had a person wearing a bikini
08/25/2005 08:17:03 PM
Your milk looks like sun screen and all the colors are blending except for the blue and black.
08/25/2005 08:03:13 PM
the model is nice, but the milk just looks ike light
08/25/2005 03:04:49 PM
Uhm, is that milk going down the front of her? Not very clear on what your focus is.
08/25/2005 10:15:19 AM
cliche
08/24/2005 09:24:41 PM
Looks like a problem tanning, more than milk.
08/24/2005 03:41:17 AM
is she lactating!?@?
08/24/2005 12:34:49 AM
Great idea, needs more milk


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