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05/22/2003 08:26:28 PM |
*Critique Club*
There is something creating a purpleish pink tint to her forhead. And I'm not sure that is very appealing. I tried this with a crop just above her eye brows, and I think that works nicely too.
The purple makeup under her eyes, makes her look like she's either been crying a lot, or like she's got real bad allergies or something. not really something common.
There is a yellow area on the bridge of her nose, that looks like it was a lighting glitch or something. Maybe a harsh reflection of light. Some skin colored powder could cut down on the ammount of glare on her face. She does have a glare on her forhead as well.
I like the white negative space. I think that it actually helps us focus on her face a bit. Kind of like "oh, nothing over here...lets look at the girl".
Focus and clarity are great. You have good detail in her face. We can see individual eye lashes, and that's good.
~Heather~ |
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05/20/2003 01:38:30 PM |
| nice idea and intresting way to shoot this but it turned out nice good work |
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05/18/2003 07:31:12 AM |
| I like the compositoin, the model is cute, but the purple under the eyes makes her look ill. Sorry just my thoughts. Still a very effective shot. Jscko. 8 |
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05/16/2003 04:20:31 PM |
| A new model Arni? :) Simple, not an orange, like it! |
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05/16/2003 03:39:39 PM |
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05/15/2003 10:23:57 PM |
| cute girl, good focus, light, and color-it's good. |
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05/15/2003 08:55:54 PM |
| Nice portrait. Good lighting and contrast on both the model and background. My one tiny complaint is that her farhead is a little too purple. |
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05/15/2003 05:37:46 PM |
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05/15/2003 01:31:16 PM |
| Nice idea. Good composition and nice lighting. |
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05/15/2003 11:59:15 AM |
| nice to see a face here, nice face too. |
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