This edited version without all of the distracting bottles is much better than the first one. As far as composition, I think you did a great job. Maybe could have included a little more of #5, and it looks like there is a leg creeping in on the left side of the bench also.
Lighting is fantastic. Nothing too harsh in either the shadows or highlights.
Maybe a little more done with DOF. Since the obvious attention is being drawn to the players on the bench, maybe a little more lens blur applied to the players in the field could be effective also. |