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A Portion Of  Our Room To Roam
A Portion Of Our Room To Roam
loriprophoto


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Room (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Canon EOS-20D
Lens: Canon EF 75-300mm f/4.0-5.6 IS USM
Location: In Our Pasture
Date: Jul 29, 2005
Aperture: f 9.5
ISO: 100
Shutter: 250th
Galleries: Landscape, Animals
Date Uploaded: Jul 29, 2005

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Statistics
Place: 80 out of 138
Avg (all users): 5.1027
Avg (commenters): 7.0000
Avg (participants): 5.0000
Avg (non-participants): 5.1704
Views since voting: 668
Views during voting: 315
Votes: 224
Comments: 7
Favorites: 0


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08/11/2005 11:50:51 PM
***greetings from the critique club***

This is a decent picture...it shows a nice scene. The problem is that your composition is lacking. You need to visualize what your intent is. Something that seems to help me is to sit back for a second, look at the scene, and pictures it as a painting that an artist would draw. Where would the artist put this object or that...would the tree in the background be included, would the foreground object(s) be bright or in shadow (meaning do I need fill flash).

When you have everything mapped out, look through your viewfinder as if you're looking at that painting. Position your subjects appropriately, and go for it. Take several shots -- heck take 100 if that's what it takes.

Hope that helped...good luck, and keep shooting, you have some great stuff in your portfolio.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/05/2005 11:47:03 PM
I love this one! It is a beautiful outdoor room!!!
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08/03/2005 03:51:59 PM
Beautiful. I love the incline of the meadow.
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07/31/2005 08:57:32 AM
more color at the bottom.
07/30/2005 12:12:55 PM
I think i would have cropped out the blurred greens at the very bottom as it really adds nothing to the photo and it still would leave the horse's in the rule of thirds. great photo score=9
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07/30/2005 02:40:43 AM
Very beautiful picture. The meadow is inviting. Nicely composed picture. Lighting is nice too. Good take on the challenge.
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07/30/2005 12:18:14 AM
I wish the tree weren't dead center. Maybe shoot from a different angle. Seems a tad overexposed as well. I like the three horses. Maybe tone down the brightness a tad.
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