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05/13/2003 02:37:12 PM |
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05/13/2003 06:16:19 AM |
| I like the colours and light reflections in the glass. I think this shot could benefit from a little application of the rule of thirds - either a horizontal third given to the black background and 2 thirds to the glass or the other way around. I'd suggest the former which gives more prominence to the glass. |
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05/13/2003 03:59:40 AM |
| Two things I might have changed in this image. Firstly I would have deepened the DOF a little more to get all the marbles in focus but still blurring out the background. And secondly, I would have tried a different angle or set up so as not to get the reflections of the buildings in the glass. The idea is very good. |
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05/11/2003 12:34:53 PM |
| The light band in the background is a distraction and the colours in the marbles could do with a bit more saturation. But good choice of subject and use of DOF. |
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05/11/2003 06:16:59 AM |
| I really enjoyed your submission, it should place well in this week's competition. 7 Morgan |
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05/09/2003 06:27:42 PM |
| nice dof and interesting subjects (are we going to see them again in primary colors?) my two thoughts are if you had boosted the saturation the colors would have had some more zing, and a higher angle might have been interesting. |
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05/09/2003 05:02:46 PM |
| Nice idea, unfortunately it has been spoilt by your very shallow DOF. I think this foto would have been a lot better if they had all been in focus. Am also not sure what is on the left side of the foto, but looks as though a finger/thumb might have crept, giving the pale pink haze. Would also have suggest a one colour background, rather than the two colour one you have opted for. |
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05/08/2003 07:15:39 AM |
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