Nice composition. Perfect choise for light and angle to take the photo. The highlight along the top weave of metal makes the shot for me. I gave it an 8.
just not grabbing me, maybe the angle, try more like 1/3rd down on left hand side, light is not from 1 direction, 1 small light would show detail / texture better, might get good reflections too.5
Nice. Like the way you controlled the glared of this shiny pen. Would have been better if tip of pen would be in focus because the perspective in this shot draw the viewer eye on the pen tip, which is the less focussed part. Good overall